Poems from the Edge of the Continent

Note from Self

April 5, 2008 · 4 Comments

I found myself today standing quite still, after working in light rain expanding the small flower bed near the sun room window. The rain was quiet for a moment, but the trees and low growth were not. There was much little flutterings and chirbles and pips. I realized I was standing in the midst of a roving band of chickadees, on the hunt for insects and bits of tasty things. My stillness, I guess, was automatic. And they did not seem to mind me because of it. I would not say, as some might, or as I perhaps might have suggested even a year ago, that they came to me, or were drawn to me by my peaceful energy. The I of me, had little to do with it. I was merely in their path, and as I did not present myself as one of the more excitable humans, they continued on their path, coming quite close to me, even peering at me and pausing for a time. “Hi,” I said to one in particular who was two feet above me on a slender branch. It was an ineffectual hi, it just came out, because we were eye to eye and well, I didn’t want to be rude. Such a tiny bead of an eye. He moved on without rushing, as did his roving mates. But for a time, I was in the thick of them without any fuss. As they moved off, I scanned the trees and the undergrowth, feeling a little lonely. They were nice to be with, those chickadees, even if like most creatures, they were just on their way somewhere.

Categories: American Contemporary Poetry · Life's Mysteries · Literature/Poetry · Nature · Poems · Poetry · Poetry & Verse · Sufi · Sufism · Writing

4 responses so far ↓

  • giiid // April 9, 2008 at 4:53 am

    You are writting very beautifully, even thougt english not is my language, I can easely feel how nice and quiet it was to be with the busy insects.

  • Maithri // April 12, 2008 at 7:06 pm

    What a sacred gift you have,

    To sing through words like this…

    Profound and achingly beautiful words,

    Sending you soft peace on loves wide wings,

    Maithri

  • Irving // April 12, 2008 at 7:26 pm

    She also leaves water and sunflower seeds out for the chipmunks, and they complain when the water and seeds are late. At times I think they know her better than I, or at least take it less for granted. Ah, love :)

    Ya Haqq!

  • akash // April 13, 2008 at 9:34 am

    Patricia ,

    How well you write !
    This peace is close to my heart as it goes into
    the slightly detached philosophical realm .
    It speaks the truth .
    We happen to be here by sheer coincidence !

    How can I forget that you posted it withn
    a few days of my request ?

    Salaams ,

    Akash

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