I have been alone for days
dusk and dawn breathing in the distance
while the silence envelops
like an approaching front.
But don’t get me wrong, the weather is fine
even as the coyotes call from the ridge line
and veils of moisture drift in to the trees.
These days, it is I who am the sentinel
turning the light toward the movement
in the underbrush, dispersing the dark.
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pbsweeney. 9/27/2008
7 responses so far ↓
Life's Elsewhere // September 28, 2008 at 1:03 am |
Good! I return to WordPress and find a fresh new poem by Patricia the next day!
beautiful dreamer // September 28, 2008 at 10:50 am |
What a beautiful little poem. I love your style of writing, there is a sweet delicacy about it.
Abdur Rahman // October 21, 2008 at 8:13 am |
Salaams Patricia
Allah! That was beautiful and evocative.
May you spread light always.
Abdur Rahman
Fernando Rivas // October 22, 2008 at 8:57 pm |
Patricia,
Your poems are as lovely as I remember you on a windswept night on a field in Long Island.
I hope you see this comment and reply to an old friend.
Fernando
Maithri // November 22, 2008 at 7:19 pm |
Your words are electric,
Thank you dear poet for being and
seeing with the clarity you do,
With love to you and yours, M
mothreed // December 9, 2008 at 7:01 pm |
Quiet as a sweep o’ the palm and, like any gesture worth the effort, the palm’s not empty; there’s something there. Fine, fine work.
Cheers.
Maithri // December 22, 2008 at 3:45 am |
Missing your beautiful poetry
my friend